bblue
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VisorVision Comments
Nice job overall! Thanks so much for using Quicktime!
However, here are some things I noted that sort of ruined parts the experience:
1) The "VisorCentral" part in the beginning is too long, ugly, and lame. Get rid of it! It nearly doubled the ground-floor one! What's worse, is the fact that it's downright UGLY! The logo backshadow clashes with the Blue Visor. The low-resolution, even on the broadband version, does not help either. Just a quick lil' Visorcentral watermark would be better! If it's going to be long, make it a little more entertaining! (Like C-Net's!)
2) Who shot the video, and why is there no light on the camera? The seiko smartpad video was like watching two shadows! If a light is out of the option, choose your viewing angles with more care!
3) The smartpad video didn't show the product really working on the Visor. Just the guy drawing and explaining, and someone holding what looks like a Microphone. That really doesn't help.
Ok, these sound really critical and nitpicky, but as a graphiculator for websites I have to comment. These are just my opinions! I hope future VV films can benefit from this overly critical critical critique.
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